Warmly and peacelly, a lamp gets lighter when it is shining in a darker place. The cartoon symbolically indicates that love, like the lamp, is needed for those who are indeed in difficulties.
A classic case to prove the point of view is the world-shocked earthquake occurred in Wenchuan in 2008. Since the government appealed to (appeal to意思是“吸引”，用得不好，应该改为called on号召) the masses for backing (rebuilding重建) the citizens of Sichuan Province （重建应该是Wenchuan，怎么是Sichuan Province？）, the nation was marvelously united to take care of the regees. Even a aculous number of people from remote areas, whose were not rich, donated whatr they could-be it money or goods （前面用whatr了，后面不能再用moeny or goods了，因为whatr的意思是“无论什么”的意思，已经包括了“钱”和“货物”。可以改成whatr they had）. It was)love that made them through (through是介词，make后面应该接动词原形。如果表达“是爱让他们在艰难中活了下来”可考虑用survive under) the hardship.(原创作文投稿绿叶鸟网 www. sanwen .com)
There is no question but that the best way to expressing our love is to know when (what，它引导宾语从句，作care about的主语) the individuals we care about are asking for a favour and to see the needs of them. As the famous saying goes, "Love leads a better world." Only with this noble feeling of human beings can we be strong enough to get rid of hopelessness and crack the hard nuts.
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