1. 目前社会上存在这样一种说法：文凭越高越吃香
2. 而有些人则认为文凭不等于知识
3. 你的观点
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Knowledge and Diploma
It is generally belid that a high diploma guarantees a promising ture. Some people identify high diplomas with profound knowledge and exceptional competence. Companies also tend to emphasize the academic achiment of a job candidate. Like it or not, there does exist a social reality – the higher diplomas one gets, the popular he becomes.
On the contrary, other people claim that a high diploma doesn’t automatically translate into knowledge. A diploma, in their eyes, is only the acknowledgment of one’s educational experience rather than a guarantee of one’s ability. Therefore, we can nr measure the depth of one’s knowledge by the grade of one’s diploma. Besides, many knowledgeable people don’t have a high diploma. Take Bill Gates for example. His ping out of college cannot deny the fact that he is one of the world’s most learned men.
So I must say no one should r equate a diploma with knowledge, because a diploma is nothing but a proof of a short-term study while genuine knowledge needs one’s lifelong devotion.（英语作文）
◇第一段思路点评：先陈述人们对高文凭高能力的看法，再点出这是一种社会现实。
◇语言点提示：job candidate求职者、应聘者
◇第二段思路点评：详细论述文凭并不等于能力。
◇语言点提示：Acknowledgment承认、致谢、感谢、答谢
◇第三段思路点评：使用一个长句阐述了你对文凭与知识辩证关系的认识。
◇语言点提示：
（1）equate a diploma with knowledge 把文凭与知识划等号
（2）nothing but a proof of a short-term study只是短期学习的证明（绿叶鸟网）
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