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Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary? 伍琴（七班） More and middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the eekend. There are t o different vie points about it. On the one hand, some think that studying follo ing the family teachers is better than self study. It can not only strenen hat you’ve learnt at school, but you learn usel things as ell. On the other hand, some people ho have the different opinion consider it a aste of time and money, for many training classes and family teachers are just orking for money, you can not learn something really usel there, and thus lose the time of relaxing yourselves. In my opinion, as students, e should really kno hether e need a training class or family teacher. First, make sure that you need them, and they ould be l, then choose a reasonable one. Just remember, once you start and nr give up. 点评：文章思路清晰，结构紧凑，行文流畅，衔接自然，用词准确，值得借鉴（赵守斌） Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary? (14班 王怡) More and middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the eekend .There are t o different vie points about it. Some people think that going to training class or having family teachers can not only strenen the kno ledge the students have learned but also them to study better .What’s ,students can gain some kno ledge that hasn’t been told in class. Ho r ,some others have an opposite opinion in their opinion ,this kind of study can make students passive in their studies and al ays depend on others .What’s orse ,some Training Class and Family teachers care not students but money .So it’s a aste of money .Students need have a rest after school .The Training Class ill take up most of their spare time . In my opinion ,both vie points are reasonable .The choice should depend on hich one is fit for the students himself .If he’s good at self-studying ,he may stay at home and study by himself if he does ell in listening to hat teachers say ,studying in Training Class ould also be a good choice . 本习作条理清晰,层次清楚,观点名确且紧扣主题.语句通顺,尚能达意.一些小词用得也恰倒好处.只是个别句子还不够简洁,今后应注意锤炼句子. (点评教师:冯辉) Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary? Stephen Shan from Grade T o Class Three单博（高二3班） More and middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the eekend. There are t o different vie points about it. Some people hold the opinion that a training class or family teacher is necessary. They beli that follo ing a teacher is better than doing self-studies. During these “ eekends studies” students cannot only strenen the kno ledge they have learnt in class, but also learn things. On the other hand, some people think that it’s not necessary to have a training class or a family teacher. Their ideas are as follo s:
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