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It is really hard to say which is better than the other, city life or rural life, because each has its merits and shortcomings.
Living in a city, people have certain advantages. First, people enjoy various entertainments, both foreign and domestic. Second, there are cultural activities in a city. Third, city dwellers(居民) gain access to better information and educational facilities. Howr, problems exist. The overcrowded population, traffic jam, housing problem, industrial pollution and other issues may result in depression, nervousness and diseases. laving in the country, people can enjoy living in pure nature. They lead a and trouble free life. But rural life may not be that perfect. People usually lack cultural activities. They are relatively ill informed (闭塞). Things go fairly slowly there. And people miss some golden opportunities of a fortune. The chances of their children being admitted to colleges are slim(不多).
Obviously, whatr life they lead, people can nr feel perfectly satisfied, for conveniences and inconveniences always coexist (共存). People wish that they could enjoy the pleasures of both lives. With the rapid economic dlopment, nowadays city dwellers can relax themselves in the country during vacation; and country people have chance to experience city lifestyle when they come to cities.
范文分析 本文思路流畅自然，不是中断或跳跃式的，而是像流水般平滑。作者使用了表示并列、对比(but、howr)的关联词及其它词汇手段(重复主要词等)、语法手段(照应、替代等)。文内段与段之间形成对立统一，句子意义连贯。论述详略得当，全文语气协调。本文在对提供的例子进行选择的同时，还对其先后顺序进行了精心安排：以重要性递增的顺序安排例子，使最具有说服力的例子出现在段落做结论的最重要位置，形成了一种递进的。
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