绿叶鸟网(www.lvyeniao.cn)原创整理的 > 英语四级作文 On Opportunity Some people often complain that Lady Luck nr favours them. God gifted (具有天赋的,天资聪慧的) as they are, they seldom taste the fruit of success. In their view, they remain underdogs (失败者) without ture opportunities. Therefore they grow gray hearted and show no interest in rything, only to find aded opportunities "prefer" others. But I hold a different viewpoint. Improving oneself and accumulating(积累) working experience and resources are vital for ture opportunities. It is like a kind of investment, you pay to get good rewards in your ture. It is said that heaven those who themselves. It is also said that something genuine (真正的,不掺假的) can stand any test. Be well Wrepared for the road aheadg Are you still waiting for a free lunch? Come on and seize opportunities It is time to go for what is good for you opportunities only go to those who prepare and grab, not those who complain and wait. If you act right now, the sweat today will prove to be smile tomorrow. 范文分析 本文的句型变化多姿多彩。在不长的篇幅内,作者采用了倒装句、祈使句、疑问句、强调句、省略句等句型。此外,本文的长句、短句“各尽所能”。其中的短句具有鲜明的强调作用。文中简洁、有力的短句被用来提出主要的论点(Be well prepared fOr the road ahead),或做出明确表态(But I hold a different viewpoint),或以加快节奏表达情绪的激动SAre you still waiting fOr a free lunch ⅡCome On and seize opportunities)
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