The Interaction of Technology and C

The Interaction of Technology and Culture
     The speaker contends that with the dlopment of technology, our traditional cultures will evaporate.  I concede that the rapid dlopment of technology has already given our lifestyle a radical change and has made the abyss between our racial stripe and the assimilated world smaller and smaller. Beyond this concession, howr, I find the speaker's contention indefensible.
     Opposite to the speaker's idea that technology and tradition are rything but compatible, I contend that traditional culture is like an impetus to science and technology. The story of Qian Xuesen  "father of our rocket history," is a persuasive example.Qian Xuesen's wife is a musician who majors in traditional German music.  Howr, the seemingly immense difference between science and art makes them much closer rather than alienated. "! get a much broader vision from the traditional German music," Qian Xuesen told us, "and the ! get from it to my scientific research is significant. "
      How do we explain the aid of tradition to science and technology? I think that the reason lies in tradition itself. It is saturated with not only a kind of lifestyle or some dialects, but also a pofound and infinite ideology and a usel and special methodology which is substantial to both science and technology.
     I disagree with the speaker for another reason as well, traditional culture is also an influential factor of the world's dlopment.  The speaker argues that the dlopment of technology will inevitably make the tradition disappear, which implies that traditional culture can do nothing to the dlopment. This idea is totally wrongheaded. The existence of traditional culture, in other words, the variety of races is an essential agent of the dlopment of the world.
     We all know that the variety of species is valuable to the thriving of us human beings, then why not the variety of races?
     Imagine a world with all the same culture, all the same tradition, and all the same etiquette.  Can you tell me whether we have made progress or have been lagging behind with no comparison?
     Experts will say that the variety of species gives us a huge depository of genes and I will say that the variety of races also bestows on us a precious large warehouse of different ideologies,methodologies, colorl legends, various living and eating styles from which we can learn a lot, gain insight and, most of all, see ourselves clearly and correctly. With the of all these things, the world will be pushed forward and the civilization of each ethnic group will prosper.
     From the standpoint of dialectics, I still can't agree with the speaker. I contend that when the technology, in other words,the global civilization, is trying to assimilate a traditional culture, the global civilization itself is inevitably the one being as similated at the same time. The interaction of things nr ends and the subject and the object continuously exchange their positions. The ubiquitous KFC snack bar is an example of the global civilization's assault into the traditional civilization. Howr, it is not difficult to find that meanwhile KFC in China has also got a Chinese label. People needn't empty their serving tray before they leave while in most western countries people do it as ahabit. In order to survive, KFC now offers not only western flavor but also Chinese flavor, such as Old Beijing Chicken Roll As you can see, the traditional culture is still energetic and ll of vitality so that it will nr be defeated.
     In sum, the speaker's assertion that technology and tradition are incompatible begs question.  Traditional culture is not only an impetus to the world of technology, but also to the whole human race. I concede that the advancement of technology has changed our culture a lot, but meanwhile the global civilization, which includes modern technology, is also being challenged by our traditional culture. Hegel said, "Those that exist are reasonable." The traditional culture is still vital and will nr be eliminated from the splendid historical stage.

简  评
    在就科技和传统之间关系的讨论进行得如火如荼的时候，作者在这篇驳论文中，展示了自己全新的独到见解：科技固然可以在一定程度上改变传统，但传统既是推动科技发展的动力，也是世界文明发展的一个不可或缺的因素和动力。辩证法也告诉我们：科
技和传统之间是一个互相影响、互相同化的关系。
    这篇文章用语正式而老练，思路大胆却不张扬，文风泼辣但不跋扈，视角全面却不烦琐。论述细致入微。通读此文，不难想像作者深谋远虑，才思敏捷，胸有成竹，豪情万丈的形象。
    本文的不足之处在于，有些用词及句式生僻、艰涩，略显矫情、做作，比如“contend”，“concede，’等。开头“the speaker”的使用也显突兀，令人不解。
    (点评教师：时丽娜)